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This is my fruit kebab. I made it for one of my cooking workshops. We focused on presentation, but it tasted Amazing! 


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  1. AnonymousNovember 30, 2015 at 3:20 PM

    We like the way you have presented your fruit kebabs.
    We also like the way you said what you focused on.
    Something you could try is write a more detailed blurb.
    Rylee, Alex and Eliot W

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